Yes I shall. I've noticed that the Fungus Statement is actually grammatically incorrect, which is quite shocking. The Power of Fungus fixes this, of course, but I may want to change it to be grammatically correct so that it may be more... grammatically correct. Anyways, I have decided that the comma will be changed to a semicolon, and that I will add a subordinating conjunction to the first clause. That leaves the question of which one to use. As? Until? Because? If? If you have an idea about this, please comment. Thanks and have a nice day!
use "as".....like, As fungus is good for your personal health, you shall eat fungus...that sounds too short though....Because fungus is good for your personal health, you shall eat it;thanks and have a nice day!!!!!..that sounds nice?..what do you think mushroom king?
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